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Gently now he speaks
Hands and fingers dance lightly
softly words tease the ears
scent so sweet
It fades
Now its buzzing ringing
Softly stinging
Shouldve made you scream
Nothing but a fucked up dream
smoke is disguising
your beautiful thoughts go into hiding
i love you
it stops.
©2008-2009 ~DreaminDemon
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Author's Comments

Painkillers clouding and i hope that you could understand Painkillers by Candy Butchers.

I wrote this awhile ago, then i was listening to this song and i was like whoa, it was about nobody originaly, now it kinda is....

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:iconkanta777:
Yet again interesting!:clap:
Good job.
:iconbroken2nite:
Very interesting. Different flow from the norm, but I like it

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Change your mind, I'll get lost if you want me to
Somehow I've found a way to get lost in you-Lost In You by Three Days Grace

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:iconhi8us07:
This is very creative, I like the surreal feel of it, and the abrupt change from soft to jarring.

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